The economy of Tanzania - corrigeons ensemble

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1. Tanzania is a country in Africa is not a rich country. Today we are going to be interested in economy of tanzania .
2. Firstly we can see the part of which parts of gdp to begin there is a gdp growth of 6 percent,itis very important thank to a big growth we have better economy. So we can see in the document that the major part of gdp is agriculture , others and construction. I think that other is turism.
3. Secondly we can see in the document that there are a lot of popular places in Tanzania and we can understand that there is a lot of turism  and in others documents there is a lot of iconic animals of Tanzania who attract many people , report money for Tanzania
4. Thirdly we can yet see in the documents the differents places of ressources there are a lot of minerals and coffee and fruts
5. To sum up the economy of kenya is ruled by ressources (minerals fruts materials) and turism ( wich iconic places and environement animals )