The economy of Zambia - corrigeons ensemble

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1. The economy of Zambia is based on the cobalt industry. 
2. This exploitation represents 75% oh their economy. 
3. The natural ressources are very important like we  see on this pie chart. 

4- The Zambia extract other minerals but they represent only 2,6%. All these other minerals are silver, uranium, lead, coal, zinc, gold and emerald.  

5- The industries of Zambia are based on agriculture which based corps, the most cultivated corps is the corn, livestock and fisheries and also on copper minning and processing. 

6- Zambia is a country, pronom relatif there are many mines and it is also a fertile land

7-  There is also the tourism which is a important part of the Zambia economy. The tourist can go see the Victoria Falls and make safari in the national parks. 
Les points 5,6 et 7 devraient arriver en 1er, en guise d'introduction 

Théo L.